Did the film communicate the script?

yes

Did it communicate the rising emotion being portrayed?

yes

What could you shoot differently?

less wind and no people accidentally getting in the shot

What would make your film more understandable?

if people would care about them

What would give your film more emotional impact?

more practice and if there was better props

a survior

here a poem me Josiah, Timana and kyle have been working on

A survivor

Lingerineine greens

The long flowing gras

My family dropping

My animal friends crying

Blood of my family

The fur of my dead mum

I’m not safe

Is my family okay

Revenge

A survivor    

By Jahdin, Josiah, Timana and Kyle.

Zodiac sign part 2

This is a thing our class has been working on.our zodiac sign part 2 i guess but this is what i did.

zodiac sign

This is my zodiac sign out of all of them i'm a Leo my animal is a lion.
comment what your zodiac sign is. ✌