Did the film communicate the script?
yes
Did it communicate the rising emotion being portrayed?
yes
What could you shoot differently?
less wind and no people accidentally getting in the shot
What would make your film more understandable?
if people would care about them
What would give your film more emotional impact?
more practice and if there was better props
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